Okay. So. Bill. Ohmigod, I never thought I could find a Bill fic so.. hot. Arghhh! What have you done to meeee?!? (LJ is such a bad, bad thing, I really shouldn't hang out in places like that!)
Maybe I should try to put my thoughts in order?
Well. First off, the library scene: Oh. Yeah. With Hermione as the not-so-secret voyeur/listener, hahahahaa! Poor child! (But I can understand her. Except for the interfering. Oh well, teenagers.. They never know when they are not welcome.) I loved Remus's quick reaction to her approaching them, I could totally picture it in my mind - hehehe.
The next whooaa bit: The scene with Tonks! Aaaaaah! (And that's not a bad 'Aaaaaah!'!) I have to admit I was a bit shocked at first, because I thought the fic might turn into a Remus-leaves-Bill-for-Tonks one in the end, but then I thought naaah, she'd have labelled it accordingly if that were the case, so yeah.. I could enjoy the scene. Meaning I did. But oh, it did have something of a pity fuck to it, so I almost felt sorry for Tonks (almost. Because well, I wanted Bill to end up with Remus; besides, I don't like Tonks very much to begin with, so.. Ah, I know, I'm being mean right now.)
And then Molly. Ha ha ha! You should have seen wouldn't have wanted to see me, I was laugh-giggling uncontrollably (in that oh-gosh-that's-so-exciting-what-will-happen-next-I'm-behaving-like-a-14-year-old way, hehe).
Oh, but why am I talking about the other characters here? Tsk tsk.
So, on to the pr0n: Uhhhh. Ahhh. glajsdlasdf oijwerf flsjdf (<- incoherent garbling) ......... -- The HOTNESS of it all! Oh my, I really, really loved the sex scenes, I can't even describe how much I did!
You beautifully manage to build up tension, every new paragraph adds to my the reader's excitement and ohhhh, your descriptions feel so real!! This may sound silly now, but I loved all the sweat in this fic, I really did. I can somehow understand that many people don't want to read about too many details, that they don't want to read about stuff that can (or does) happen in RL, that they want the fic to stay fictional to a certain degree, but all the sweat and spunk (as well as the taste and feel of it) in here made this fic feel so very real!!!!!!!! Beautiful!
(Oh damn, I just realised.. I think I'm only repeating what somebody else already said in their comment above. Duh. Well, I read the comments before the fic, and I'm not good at remembering things in general, so yeah, whatever..)
I'm still not sure if I'll ever like the long red hair (I like the freckles though!! And I especially liked Remus's!!!), but fortunately, you only mentioned it once (and see, you had told me, but I had forgotten about that too..) and it was so brief and toward the end that I could happily ignore it. :)
Conclusion: I am really looking forward to any other Remus/Bill fic you may ever write!!! :D I'm not sure if I can say the same for any other Bill fic (like the one you mentioned above), but Remus/Bill..? - Sure! Anytime! (Give it to me baby, uh huh, uh huh..)
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Okay. So. Bill. Ohmigod, I never thought I could find a Bill fic so.. hot. Arghhh! What have you done to meeee?!? (LJ is such a bad, bad thing, I really shouldn't hang out in places like that!)
Maybe I should try to put my thoughts in order?
Well. First off, the library scene: Oh. Yeah. With Hermione as the not-so-secret voyeur/listener, hahahahaa! Poor child! (But I can understand her. Except for the interfering. Oh well, teenagers.. They never know when they are not welcome.) I loved Remus's quick reaction to her approaching them, I could totally picture it in my mind - hehehe.
The next whooaa bit: The scene with Tonks! Aaaaaah! (And that's not a bad 'Aaaaaah!'!) I have to admit I was a bit shocked at first, because I thought the fic might turn into a Remus-leaves-Bill-for-Tonks one in the end, but then I thought naaah, she'd have labelled it accordingly if that were the case, so yeah.. I could enjoy the scene. Meaning I did. But oh, it did have something of a pity fuck to it, so I almost felt sorry for Tonks (almost. Because well, I wanted Bill to end up with Remus; besides, I don't like Tonks very much to begin with, so.. Ah, I know, I'm being mean right now.)
And then Molly. Ha ha ha! You
should have seenwouldn't have wanted to see me, I was laugh-giggling uncontrollably (in that oh-gosh-that's-so-exciting-what-will-happen-next-I'm-behaving-like-a-14-year-old way, hehe).Oh, but why am I talking about the other characters here? Tsk tsk.
So, on to the pr0n:
Uhhhh. Ahhh. glajsdlasdf oijwerf flsjdf (<- incoherent garbling) ......... -- The HOTNESS of it all! Oh my, I really, really loved the sex scenes, I can't even describe how much I did!
You beautifully manage to build up tension, every new paragraph adds to
mythe reader's excitement and ohhhh, your descriptions feel so real!! This may sound silly now, but I loved all the sweat in this fic, I really did. I can somehow understand that many people don't want to read about too many details, that they don't want to read about stuff that can (or does) happen in RL, that they want the fic to stay fictional to a certain degree, but all the sweat and spunk (as well as the taste and feel of it) in here made this fic feel so very real!!!!!!!! Beautiful!(Oh damn, I just realised.. I think I'm only repeating what somebody else already said in their comment above. Duh. Well, I read the comments before the fic, and I'm not good at remembering things in general, so yeah, whatever..)
I'm still not sure if I'll ever like the long red hair (I like the freckles though!! And I especially liked Remus's!!!), but fortunately, you only mentioned it once (and see, you had told me, but I had forgotten about that too..) and it was so brief and toward the end that I could happily ignore it. :)
Conclusion: I am really looking forward to any other Remus/Bill fic you may ever write!!! :D I'm not sure if I can say the same for any other Bill fic (like the one you mentioned above), but Remus/Bill..? - Sure! Anytime! (Give it to me baby, uh huh, uh huh..)