Wow - I've never read this pairing before and I really liked it.I read both parts and the smut was wondrous! Really hot. I love that your Remus is pretty forceful - most fics I've read have him as the submissive, overwhelmed one (usually overwhelmed by Sirius!)

I also enjoyed your attention to their senses: the look of their freckled skin, and how everything sounded and tasted and smelt and felt. Lovely stuff.
Your description of Remus in the armchair drinking whisky was so vivid, I felt like I was in the room! Just as well I wasn't though, might have been a bit of a gooseberry...