Life seems but a quick succession of busy nothings

Eek! Major grammatical problem is driving me nuts, especially as you've used it more than once:

"the Face's of Boe Millenia"

"the Face's of Boe Face"

We *do not* insert the posessive apostrophe-s into the middle of the nounal phrase that identifies the posessor. Never, never, never! So it's:

"the Face of Boe's Millenia"

and:

"the Face of Boe's Face"

[NODS FIRMLY]

Apart from that.... Mrrrrrrooowww!!! =;o}