words fail me, I simply *love* your Snape and this just got better and better - the first line is inspired and you do a very good hangover description!!!! He realised that the threat wasn’t quite as effective when given by a person lying on their front on a sofa, their eyes crusted and their mouths full of dead mice, but his instinct prompted him to attack first and think later I particularly like the dead mice!
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Date: 2004-04-02 02:04 am (UTC)He realised that the threat wasn’t quite as effective when given by a person lying on their front on a sofa, their eyes crusted and their mouths full of dead mice, but his instinct prompted him to attack first and think later
I particularly like the dead mice!