I feel dirty

[donnaimmaculata]

My second (and last) Squickfest submission is up, and it's Mary Sue/Ron's feet.

No graphic sex this time, nor too much graphic foot action, but it's got Mary Sue in all her glory, including name, hair, past, powers, and... a Dark Secret. Extra bonus: author's notes in the text and pop song lyrics.

And Ron's feet.

Come on, you know you want to.

Comments

[frankie-lee.livejournal.com]

In the words of NPR's Jim Nader... "Sweet Lord." LOL!!

[soawen.livejournal.com]

omg that was liek 2 cut!!!1 theyrluvisso...uhm,downtoearth. yea.

The pet unicorn killed me which was a good thing, for when she turned out to be a dragoness I would have died of horror anyway ;)

Oh, and right now my biggest wish is to switch haircare!spy!Snape with canon!Snape *eg*

[marksykins.livejournal.com]

Okay, here I am. That was so fantastically gross, which is exactly what I'd expect from you. Dead pet unicorn, Ron momentarily changing his lust object to Snape, the feet fetish. The uterus that would hold the saviour. Hee!

But, it was the song lyrics that killed me. Eternal flame? Bwah! And it was, what, The Backstreet Boys in Ron's soundtrack?

The only problem with good writers writing Mary Sue is the stories are actually good. I laughed my ass off, which is definitely better than the peeking-through-my-fingers horror that usually accompanies the Sue pain.

And yay! I get to use my teary sue icon.